Open Poetry #23 |
Silver Leaves |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Silver Leaves can I tell you about the silver leaves it’s where water climbed and froze with ease the sun was gone a day to miss warmth had forgotten a tree to kiss this twist of last became a skill caress of want long moved to chill needs have aches there is a price water once warm turns to ice I’m not disappointed, I never expected anything from you. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
This is lovely. Yes, I've seen these silver leaves. You placed them here, with your words, for everyone to see. This is wonderful Helen, just wonderful. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is just beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you can tell me and I can understand totally...yes, very good piece, a beautifully put description of 'just the way it is'. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh my gosh, I have seen this too, and especially when the leaves are still on the trees in color it is gorgeous, almost like stained glass! (kiss on cheek) This is marvelous, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
simply you |
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