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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-10-17 08:54 PM


Silver Leaves


can I tell you about
the silver leaves
it’s where water climbed
and froze with ease
the sun was gone
a day to miss
warmth had forgotten
a tree to kiss
this twist of last
became a skill
caress of want
long moved to chill
needs have aches
there is a price
water once warm
turns to ice


I’m not disappointed,  I never expected anything from you.

© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
WhiteRose
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1 posted 2002-10-17 08:55 PM


This is lovely. Yes, I've seen these silver leaves. You placed them here, with your words, for everyone to see. This is wonderful Helen, just wonderful.
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2 posted 2002-10-17 10:16 PM


This is just beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

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3 posted 2002-10-17 11:14 PM


you can tell me and I can understand totally...yes, very good piece, a beautifully put description of 'just the way it is'.
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4 posted 2002-10-17 11:49 PM




(sigh) Oh my gosh, I have seen this too, and especially when the leaves are still on the trees in color it is gorgeous, almost like stained glass! (kiss on cheek) This is marvelous, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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5 posted 2004-05-03 04:29 AM


simply you
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