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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2002-12-16 05:36 PM


Relationships

Don't spend too much time wondering
why it's not working out for you.
In most cases it's not working
because you're with the wrong person.
In that case there's not
much that you can say or do.
No matter how much you woo her.
No matter how much you coo her.
She'll never allow herself
to fall in love with you.

JamesLee
December16
2002


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Magnus
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1 posted 2002-12-16 05:44 PM


As was once said....you can lead a horse to
water but....

Good points James...

passing shadows
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2 posted 2002-12-17 12:41 PM


this cuts...because I've been told the same thing.
Salty
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since 2002-11-23
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Texas
3 posted 2002-12-17 01:31 AM


A helpless feeling especially when you think the person is the one for you.
A very touching write.


~Salty

In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you.
--Deepak Chop

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