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kayjay
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0 posted 2002-12-15 08:23 AM



Can you see us on the road that's best
Highways stretching out before we rest
Even numbers running east to west
Roaring on to find the place we quest
Isn't it a marvel having zest
Sharing hands and hearts within our nest
Holding love and passion in life's test


© Copyright 2002 Ken Julkowski - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2002-12-15 08:27 AM



But wait and see the turn in road
past the crickets and croaking toads
see the trees and summer's bright
see the mists and swirling lights,
go past the fog into unknown
travel roads less traveled on...

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2 posted 2002-12-15 08:31 AM


Ken~This is absolutely beautiful!
And I love Karilea's add on response.
Well done, poet sir.
~Hugs~

~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~

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3 posted 2002-12-16 12:07 PM


loved your poem, kayjay, and KJ's reply.
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4 posted 2002-12-16 12:16 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is lovely, sweet friend, and may you always cherish each moment with a smile, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ken, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

ethome
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5 posted 2002-12-16 04:24 PM


Interesting rhyme scheme and a lively poem full of feeling!
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6 posted 2002-12-17 12:44 PM


love it, love it!
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