Open Poetry #23 |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Can you see us on the road that's best Highways stretching out before we rest Even numbers running east to west Roaring on to find the place we quest Isn't it a marvel having zest Sharing hands and hearts within our nest Holding love and passion in life's test |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
But wait and see the turn in road past the crickets and croaking toads see the trees and summer's bright see the mists and swirling lights, go past the fog into unknown travel roads less traveled on... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ken~This is absolutely beautiful! And I love Karilea's add on response. Well done, poet sir. ~Hugs~ ~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
loved your poem, kayjay, and KJ's reply. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is lovely, sweet friend, and may you always cherish each moment with a smile, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ken, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Interesting rhyme scheme and a lively poem full of feeling! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love it, love it! |
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