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vandana
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0 posted 2002-10-17 06:23 PM


It Is all about
Having good times
Let us enjoy this day
You will surely find a way
To happiness
good times
Time rolls by
For having good times
Now I am not alone
anymore

Because you are by my side
Loneliness hides away
By the dark clouds
Now Iam here
with you

So long
I haven't had a bit of happiness
Since It has been
A long time

For me to have fun
Now I don't have to hide and run
To look forward
for having good times
Let us not take away
the happiness
In life

They say that
life Is short
Yet we should hold on
to time
To enjoy
Now the day has come
to have fun...
Let's have a good times
Today

[This message has been edited by vandana (10-17-2002 06:24 PM).]

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Secret Whisper
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1 posted 2002-10-17 06:32 PM


It is so true, life is short. I loved the advice you give in this piece: Hold onto the good times... they are fleating. Wonderful write.

"See, no one loves..." - Prayers for Rain

SmartChick
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2 posted 2002-10-17 06:43 PM


Nice poem.
Larry C
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3 posted 2002-10-17 06:48 PM


vandana,
I sure wish I was bi-lingual. You impress me so much. This was great and a good philosophy besides. I enjoyed...a lot.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2002-10-17 11:39 PM




(sigh) Such a wonderful central truth fills your words, sweet friend, we must celebrate life as it is short and I wish for love to find your way and always bring you great joy! (big hugggssssss) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Earth Angel
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5 posted 2002-10-18 12:01 PM


I'm happy that you are happy!---and it certainly comes through in your writing!

Earth Angel

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6 posted 2004-05-03 04:28 AM


that's what it's about!
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