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0 posted 2002-12-15 08:02 AM






Living Inside A SnowGlobe

I love the magic of this day
Cold to colder still
Living in a round snowglobe
Giving me a thrill

Crystal flakes falling down
All around this house
Makes me feel so very small
Like a Christmas mouse

If I use imagination
And giggle in my soul
Why then you can shake me up
And stir this snowy cold

'Round me silver slivers fly
These sparkling crystal flakes
Chill winds will lift to sigh
Just by your very shake

Jiggle my snowglobe merrily
Give me a little thrill
Better yet come sing me verily,
And warm away the chill

But now, this winter,
Please, come, look close
As our littlest Angel
Sings to her heavenly Host

Her wings are spread
Though crystal flakes fly
As warm is her love
As Prince of Peace stays nigh.

~*~


10 December 2000
Revised 10 December 2001
Revised, and amended
15 December 2002

© Copyright 2002 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-12-15 08:33 AM


Wonderful Karilea!
I love snowglobes...they're so beautiful..
Enjoyed this so much!
~Hugs~

~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~

kayjay
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2 posted 2002-12-15 08:45 AM


I'm always awed by the word pictures you paint so well. Your subjects and descriptors seem to have endless variety.   KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

Nan
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3 posted 2002-12-15 08:56 AM


This Christmas is indeed most special - With each of us reveling in our "littlest angels"... I'm smiling...
Martie
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4 posted 2002-12-15 11:40 AM


Karilea

You are special!  

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5 posted 2002-12-15 11:44 AM


Now how did you know that snow globes were my favorite.  This is exquisite my dear.....and the lil angel singing makes it perfect....I can hear her....warm smiles..
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6 posted 2002-12-15 11:46 AM


Karilea, I love your giggles and smiles. Those smiles show through in your poems and replies, sweet lady.    

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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7 posted 2002-12-15 01:06 PM



I love snow globes! Since I cannot fit inside them, I use my imagination to go within the magical, snowy mini world!

Your wonderfully, descriptive poem just put me inside, yet another one!
Thank you!

~ Sending you lots of happy, holiday hugs

Linda

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8 posted 2002-12-15 01:21 PM


I've always loved those globes, I'd have a collection if I could...maybe one day...great write to add to the collection that I do have!
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