Reflections lying in a pool of glass

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Open Poetry #23

Reflections lying in a pool of glass

A Tone of Voice
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0 posted 2002-12-14 03:55 PM

Where the skin breathes
and I tremble
we are the turbulent
reflection lying
in a pool of glass
you move gently
tracing your fingers
inside the edges of my mind
I am the body velvet and smooth
opening to a wonder
where the continuum collides with
heaven and circumstance
I've seen your face I know
the luxury of your eyes
I hear your voice
the rhythm is our song
the night is our mystery
the joining is our dance
we are the turbulent reflection
lying in a pool of glass

passing shadows
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1 posted 2002-12-14 05:39 PM

beautiful lines, the wording is great!

A Tone of Voice
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2 posted 2002-12-14 06:01 PM

passing shadows~ thank you very much for taking the time to read and the kind words~

ATOV~~

~I envy only those who have perfected the art of being~

~ATOV

Cpat Hair

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3 posted 2002-12-14 06:54 PM

nice...
you set the mood well with the imagery and wording...

I enjoyed

regards2you
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4 posted 2002-12-14 07:08 PM

A Tone of Voice,

This is lovely. Enjoyed each line.

Warm regards, Pat

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"Desiderata"

Martie

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5 posted 2002-12-14 07:21 PM

Sensually lovely slide of words...Much enjoyed.

Midnitesun

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6 posted 2002-12-14 10:19 PM

VERY NICE! I love the soft sensuality of this piece.

A Tone of Voice
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7 posted 2002-12-14 11:56 PM

Cpat Hair, regard2you, Martie, and Midnitesun....I think it's great when others read your words and take the time to reply.

Thank YOu,

~ATov

~I envy those who have perfected the art of being~

~A~Tov

wranx
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8 posted 2002-12-15 02:31 AM

Yes, this is stellar.
Seems that you don't post often. But, quality is always prefered to quantity.

This is quality!

~wranx

"The shortest distance between two points is.....sometimes intolerable"

~Bukowski~

A Tone of Voice
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9 posted 2002-12-15 10:56 AM

wranx, quality, what a nice thing to say, you certainly warmed my heart~~ thank you very much. *S*

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