Open Poetry #23 |
Gift Of Time |
WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
A moment I could spare my love to spend in time with you I'll show you what a sigh does hold come admire passion's view. I'll give this small bit of daydream present it as gift of heart pure pleasure wrapped with a bow and the sting of eros dart. Here, this moment I give to thee share this gift of time with me. WhiteRose [This message has been edited by WhiteRose (10-17-2002 04:36 PM).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
WhiteRose~ Just lovely~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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*Stubby* Member
since 2002-09-19
Posts 122 |
Very Nice Thankyou J |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
"I'll show you what a sigh does hold.."...a sigh expresses so much emotion...sometimes tells us more than words... ...believe what your heart feels... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"...the sting of Eros dart"...ooh, that is goood! EA |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Anne, this is a very good poem. Thanks for sharing. Love To All, Ethel |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is lovely, sweet friend, and may this special moment of love always fill your heart and treat you with that warm afterglow forever! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
Ahhhhh very sensual and lovely I sure enjoyed this wonderful treasure hugs, Cher Poetry is: |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Anne This was simply exquisite and so much enjoyed. Take care....Sue I am in motion |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
How very beautiful. *S* Whether you're talking about your kids, a dear friend, your mate, or anyone else important to you... the gift of time is an unforgettable, unequaled gift of self. *S* |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Thank you Marge, glad you enjoyed. Stubby, Thank you, and you're welcome. Julie, thanks so much. Thank you scorpio for your comments. Linda, as always, glad something I wrote touched ya somehow. Ethel, your comments are always appreciated. Noah, thanks for commenting and for always being so sweet. Thanks Cher, for reading and for your lovely response. Sue, thank you, what a lovely thing to say. I'm glad you enjoyed. suthern, thanks dear friend. I'm always happy to know you enjoyed. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
and you never know when you don't have time to give or receive anymore, that is what makes it a special gift, to be cherished for days to come. |
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