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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Abandon Walking with the odor of flowers Feeling all the warmth of the sun Absorbing the play of its power Till the time of my walk is done Umbrella by a sky full of clouds Painted yellow auburn dare Speaking fantasies aloud Calling me to play if I care. And my heart took off in flair With illusions wings of flight And I flew but I knew not where But flew towards the stars of the night. And they’re in a silvered moon light glen With phantom fantasies in store Waited each piece of figments yen To wrap me in a web of awe And I abandoned to the enzyme And osmosed in this moment’s time |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
In those last two lines... I hear the sizzle... smiling here, Sy! Have a cup with me? |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"And I abandoned to the enzyme And osmosed in this moment’s time"   (smiles) Wow, I love the whole poem but the end really stuck out at me, this is one diagnosis of a delightful morning read, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good Morning, Mr. T.! ~ It is always a pleasure to start my day off with a warm cup of T ! As I read the fruits of your busy pen, I am "absorbing the play of its power"... My imagination is stimulated and freed to explore the limits of the universe without "Abandon"! ~ May you forever sail the seas of blue ~ EA |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Dearest Sy - You have the MOST wondrous of minds - It travels to the most exotic places we could possibly imagine...  |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Ahhhh Sy .... echoing dear Nan above. You do indeed have a beautiful mind. This was lovely. Best wishes and hugs, /Kit |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Good morning Sy: My tea tastes so much better now that I have had my fill of your magnificent morning write. Enjoy your day....Hugs, Marti Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sy, this is a beautiful morning read... More tea? ~Warm morning hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I swear sometimes it's hard to read your poetry, what with all that sparkling fairy dust flying around!  and sometimes I even hear little tinkles of glass chime... mornin' sy... Lovely place you have here! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Umbrella by a sky full of clouds Painted yellow auburn dare ================================== And my heart took off in flair With illusions wings of flight And I flew but I knew not where But flew towards the stars of the night. And they're in a silvered moon light glen With phantom fantasies in store Waited each piece of figments yen To wrap me in a web of awe And I abandoned to the enzyme And osmosed in this moment's time ===================================== Umbrella by a sky full of clouds Painted yellow auburn dare Stinkylove...you wrap us all in a web of awe with your wonderous rhymes and imagery swept poetry.... your poetic osmosis is my metered mitosis *ww*  Unknown to us, there are moments when crevices open for time to come alive with begining. |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Fantastic flight of fancy Sir. Enjoyed |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Seymour - Thankyou for this smiling morning read. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
In the last two lines I experienced a ~soundless slide into 'bliss'~. Thank you for taking us with you. Enjoyed this much. Warmly ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Thank you I will. Noah, Thank you for the WOW. Earth Angel, Thank you so much. Nan, Thank you my love. Kit, Thank you for the lovely. Marti, Thank you for the hugs and hugs back Enchantress, Thank you dear and hugs back. Serenity, You are a doll, enjoy the tinkles. JM, LOL sweet comment. Worked on my Email today, I think you can use the new Email address now. I will send you a letter sometime today WWRS RSWells, Thank you for the read and enjoy. Chris, You welcome and thank you. regards2you, Beautiful comment, thank you. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Sy~ I have to echo so many others here...this is truly beautiful. You have such a wonderful gift with words, my friend. I absolutely love this. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Vicky, Thank you so much for the read like and bump. |
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