Open Poetry #23 |
Sing Me The Blues (lyrical-inspired by Cpat) |
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Play me a sad song baby sing me the blues straight from your heart cuz you got nothin' to lose. Paint me a picture with your melody sing me your song in pure blues harmony. Strum me a cord in mesmerizing lull let me feel the rhythm deep down in my soul. Play me a sad song baby sing me the blues straight from your heart cuz you got nothin' to lose. dmsmith 12-2002 (thanks Cpat, for the inspire. ) I know that you can 'read' me |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I heard this one Donna, it's beautiful! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
( smiling) Glad I could inspire... now where is that blues verse I wrote? Blues for Leaving Sometimes I get so lonely Some times I get so sad Some times I got nobody And it always feels bad I got them blues Them lonesome blues I got them blues And I aint got nothin to lose You told me you cared You told me you were true You told me you’d stay Then you up and ran away I got them blues Them lonesome blues I got them blues And I aint got nothin to lose Now you aint worth the worry The heartaches and regret You aint got nothin that I can’t find some place to get I got the blues The lonesome blues I got the blues But I aint got nothin to lose I Like yours.... I actually wrote several blues verses... would like to see more from you... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hey, Donna and Capt. Ron, I like the blues verses. Are ya'll gonna put some jazzey music to them???? "Love makes the world go around" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gentle Spirit All you need is a guitar, enjoyed. |
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sigheyes Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 323the winds of destiny |
Sing it gal, and smile. |
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Ada'doLisdo'ti Member
since 2002-12-10
Posts 123California |
Gentle spirit, Cpat very well played the music surrounds me, and moves me. Of all I've lost; I miss my innocence the most. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Nicely done..both your's and the Captain's.....I love the blues..have ya ever heard of "I got them OB..Gee why me, blues? |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Toe you are a rascal... ( laughing) |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Beautiful Donna! I love to listen to the blues. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Gentle Spirit - now I wrote a few bluesly ones, I'll play them for you on my guitar... BC |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) I love the blues and jazz you spice up your words with here, sweet friend, you awlays write so beautifully! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, now time for a little latin twist of a smile, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Donna~ Enjoyed very much. I just love the blues, music from deep down in the soul...Paul " To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you " |
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