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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2002-12-13 10:42 AM


Play me a sad song
baby sing me the blues
straight from your heart
cuz you got nothin' to lose.

Paint me a picture
with your melody
sing me your song
in pure blues harmony.


Strum me a cord
in mesmerizing lull
let me feel the rhythm
deep down in my soul.

Play me a sad song
baby sing me the blues
straight from your heart
cuz you got nothin' to lose.

dmsmith 12-2002

(thanks Cpat, for the inspire.   )

I know that you can 'read' me
but can you  'hear'  "me"?

© Copyright 2002 dmsmith - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2002-12-13 10:44 AM


I heard this one Donna, it's beautiful!
Cpat Hair
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2 posted 2002-12-13 10:57 AM


( smiling) Glad I could inspire... now where is that blues verse I wrote?

Blues for Leaving

Sometimes I get so lonely
Some times I get so sad
Some times I got nobody
And it always feels bad

I got them blues
Them lonesome blues
I got them blues
And I aint got nothin to lose

You told me you cared
You told me you were true
You told me you’d stay
Then you  up and ran away

I got them blues
Them lonesome blues
I got them blues
And I aint got nothin to lose

Now you aint worth the worry
The heartaches and regret
You aint got nothin that
I can’t find some place to get

I got the blues
The lonesome blues
I got the blues
But  I aint got nothin to lose

I Like yours.... I actually wrote several blues verses... would like to see more from you...

garysgirl
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3 posted 2002-12-13 11:03 AM


Hey, Donna and Capt. Ron,
I like the blues verses. Are ya'll gonna put some jazzey music to them????    

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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Tamarac Fla
4 posted 2002-12-13 11:19 AM


Gentle Spirit
All you need is a guitar, enjoyed.

sigheyes
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5 posted 2002-12-13 04:50 PM


Sing it gal,
and smile.     

Ada'doLisdo'ti
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6 posted 2002-12-13 04:58 PM


Gentle spirit, Cpat very well played the music surrounds me, and moves me.

Of all I've lost; I miss my innocence  the most.

Toerag
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7 posted 2002-12-13 04:59 PM


Nicely done..both your's and the Captain's.....I love the blues..have ya ever heard of  "I got them OB..Gee why me, blues?
Cpat Hair
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8 posted 2002-12-13 05:18 PM


Toe you are a rascal... ( laughing)
SmartChick
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9 posted 2002-12-13 05:52 PM


Beautiful Donna! I love to listen to the blues.
Bill Charles
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10 posted 2002-12-13 06:48 PM


Gentle Spirit - now I wrote a few bluesly ones, I'll play them for you on my guitar...

BC

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11 posted 2002-12-13 08:47 PM




(sigh) I love the blues and jazz you spice up your words with here, sweet friend, you awlays write so beautifully! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, now time for a little latin twist of a smile, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Paul Wilson
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12 posted 2002-12-18 08:50 PM


Donna~ Enjoyed very much. I just love the blues, music from deep down in the soul...Paul

" To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you "

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