Open Poetry #23 |
Wanting |
WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
The silence that enfolds around, soft embrace of emptiness I feel the space you filled now void of your essence encompassing in loneliness as love has left with you... I'm here, myself, and fantasy lacking in it's touch missing all the pleasure {{{still reeling in the rush}}} I caress the soft of me touch the heat of want as you would do a sensuous slide of hand across skin and the missing again is a game I can only play after the light of day in darkened room fantasies on loom I weave a touch in thought to soothe to sate for naught for still I come up wanting your hand upon my flesh. WhiteRose "my reflection becomes me" |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I know this feeling this was very good!! M |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done... one can feel the desire in this..desire for more than empty... |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
I loved the last two lines.....there's more than one meaning there! Great write!! ~~S~~ Pen how you truly feel... |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
very sensuous and suggestive, but nice |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
This leaves an echo in my heart... Nicely done. ThisDiamond |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Wanting the touch...I do understand this all too well. |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
I've missed reading you lately. This is superbly expressed ,but oh so sad too. I wish you happiness and peace be blessed< Cher Poetry is: |
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