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paladin
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0 posted 2002-12-13 02:02 AM


He will sing you a song
that will gladden your heart
Or sing of a wrong
of two lovers apart

His lute will strum
the soft notes in the air
To the slow beat of the drum
Love life and forget your cares

paladin

....a knight without armor

© Copyright 2002 Robert E. Jackson - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-12-13 09:25 AM


Exactly. I like the title, and the message of the poem.
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2 posted 2002-12-13 09:43 AM


uh huh.... nicely said and executed.. enjoyed

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Gaia
3 posted 2002-12-13 11:17 AM


BRAVO! I enjoyed this bard's tune.
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4 posted 2002-12-13 12:56 PM


Ooooh how I love this!
You have penned a keeper sire!
~Tally-ho & hugs~

~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~

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5 posted 2002-12-13 03:20 PM


HAVE GUN WILL TRAVEL

WIRE PALADIN

SAN FRANCISCO
Great Write Gunslinger....as always

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6 posted 2002-12-13 09:14 PM




(sigh) Oh Robert, this is lovely, sweet friend, you always write so beautifully! (sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Robert, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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