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Duncan
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0 posted 2002-12-13 01:59 AM



I needed to say
I love you
to someone tonight

then remembered
that tree falling in the forest…

© Copyright 2002 Duncan - All Rights Reserved
Salty
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Texas
1 posted 2002-12-13 02:39 AM


I heard that tree fall....you better tell em.
Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration
2 posted 2002-12-13 03:00 AM


...profound thought. lonely thought. understood thought.

peace m'man.

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2002-12-13 04:00 AM


Lovely...James
MidnightSon
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between the gutter & the stars
4 posted 2002-12-13 04:03 AM


this made me chuckle at its wit and sigh in empathy...
well done.

i hate this feeling, btw...

through the ravages of sleeplessness lies the comfort of the night

nicolecruz
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since 2002-12-11
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5 posted 2002-12-13 05:15 AM


awesome...seriously. witty and sincere and so precise. so simple and succint, and yet complex and lovely. well done.
Tracey
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since 2001-08-29
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where insanity meets breeding
6 posted 2002-12-13 07:16 AM


Heck, for someone who can have an entire conversation with someone who’s sleeping (thereby ensuring that you’re not interrupted), I’m sure you’d find a way for them to hear you.

You can never win or lose
If you don't
Run the race

Psychedelic Furs - Love My Way

RSWells
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7 posted 2002-12-13 07:33 AM


Economic, succinct, precise. Enjoyed
Janet Marie
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8 posted 2002-12-13 07:50 AM


*sting of distill*

forget the forest Dunc ... go to the beach.




(see sig.)

It's so nice
to wake up in the morning
all alone
and not have to tell somebody
you love them
when you don't love them
any more

R.Brautigan

Cpat Hair
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9 posted 2002-12-13 09:26 AM


bravo!
Midnitesun
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Gaia
10 posted 2002-12-13 10:42 AM


Well distilled. Masterfully done.

(Tracey, talkin in your sleep again? LOL, glad to see that little devil icon and the T.)

garysgirl
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11 posted 2002-12-13 11:15 AM


Duncan, a lot said in a few words. Very good......    

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

Sandpiper
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land of flora and fauna
12 posted 2002-12-14 06:18 AM


..been reading my thoughts??  applause!!


"And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul."
Pablo Neruda

passing shadows
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displaced
13 posted 2002-12-16 04:05 AM



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