Open Poetry #23 |
2:AM distill |
Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I needed to say I love you to someone tonight then remembered that tree falling in the forest… |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
I heard that tree fall....you better tell em. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
...profound thought. lonely thought. understood thought. peace m'man. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...James |
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MidnightSon Member
since 2002-05-15
Posts 312between the gutter & the stars |
this made me chuckle at its wit and sigh in empathy... well done. i hate this feeling, btw... through the ravages of sleeplessness lies the comfort of the night |
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nicolecruz Junior Member
since 2002-12-11
Posts 16 |
awesome...seriously. witty and sincere and so precise. so simple and succint, and yet complex and lovely. well done. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Heck, for someone who can have an entire conversation with someone who’s sleeping (thereby ensuring that you’re not interrupted), I’m sure you’d find a way for them to hear you. You can never win or lose |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Economic, succinct, precise. Enjoyed |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
*sting of distill* forget the forest Dunc ... go to the beach. (see sig.) It's so nice |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
bravo! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Well distilled. Masterfully done. (Tracey, talkin in your sleep again? LOL, glad to see that little devil icon and the T.) |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Duncan, a lot said in a few words. Very good...... "Love makes the world go around" |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
..been reading my thoughts?? applause!! "And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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