Open Poetry #23 |
Duality of Dreams... |
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
The softest knock upon a winter's door. One heart in search of two in explore. The softest rap, meant to one be woken. Love born not cheaply, softly spoken. The eyes that stare beyond the light into the snow falling on winter's night. The sigh that is heard as a flake falls. A whisper's sound, of romance's calls. I touch the pane, to draw my heart that you might see the crimson find. I draw in words our romantic art. We touch in dreams of slumber's mind. You gave your love on freedom's wind as hands did clasp in sensual bond. Our bodies lithe, in lover's blend upon the touch of a faerie's wand. I leave this place, a physical home to live a life within two dreams. A place where both willingly roam beneath our fall...our crystal streams. Goodnite...Pleasant dreams... |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
Ahhhhhh very romantic..*Swoon* and a bit mysterious at the end.. I was glad to be the first reply tonight. (was searchin' for Magnus earlier) Aloha and goodnight dear poet hugs, Cher Poetry is: |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
A lovely dream may it come true for all |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Soft as a fluffed pillow. Good write and good night. -MVS "AS ABOVE SO BELOW" |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Barry "I touch the pane, to draw my heart that you might see the crimson find. I draw in words our romantic art. We touch in dreams of slumber's mind." Sweet dreams, dear man. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Such a romantic, Barry. Thanks for sharing your poetry. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"You gave your love on freedom's wind as hands did clasp in sensual bond. Our bodies lithe, in lover's blend upon the touch of a faerie's wand." Very, very nice Barry. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Just smiling here Barry. You do romance justice. Enjoyed. Warm regards, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
lovely words to embrace in slumber--enjoyed! "And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul." |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
When you write romance, there is a warmth unmistakable and deep. May all your wishes come true my friend. Honored to read you. TD |
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Drifter New Member
since 2002-11-27
Posts 9Arkansas, U.S. |
Enchanting piece (peace). A true pleasure read with justice done to form. Thank you. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Ahh.."to sleep, per chance to dream" this is lovely Magnus. hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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