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quik
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0 posted 2002-12-12 02:19 PM



Lost in rage i watch the mellow ice melt
Snow white ice as it pierce through the ground
The ground breaks as if hot flamin lava has sat on it for a while
Cold water slidin down the broken roads
filling in every crack along its path to freedom
flowing at speeds unbelievable
it meets its enemy
the DRAIN
scared and trying to change position
its has no choice but to fail its mission
its over
we have failed

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1 posted 2002-12-12 02:34 PM


Methinks this is about so much more than water. Enjoyed this very much, Quick.
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