An Oath of Love (teenage romance)

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Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

0 posted 2002-12-12 12:25 PM

That I may stand once more with pride
And have you always by my side
For you, my heart is yours to keep
to comfort you awake in asleep
By gentle Kiss and smiling face
may sadness, happiness replace
Take shelter from this world in me
On wings of fire I'll set us free
to soar above what makes us sad
and bring us joys we've never had
This and more to you I swear
if you to me in love would bare
Your heart, your soul, your mind, and thoughts
and be the one whom I have saught
Though promises hold seldom true
Upon my life this oath for you

****Another ancient one from my high school notebook, I always was a cheesy romantic I guess lol***

[This message has been edited by Aenimal (12-12-2002 12:55 AM).]

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2002-12-12 02:21 AM

Cheesy is cool. You wanted complete and total bareness...of soul.

Ya, right. LOL. Kidding aside, nice poem Raph.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2002-12-12 02:27 AM

cheesy is good

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2002-12-12 02:28 AM

Raph, you hopeless romantic you,

I don't care if you think it's "cheesy", or not, this hopeless romantic likes it....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

4 posted 2002-12-12 06:37 AM

yes, romantic,
but there is not just one soulmate out there for you, .........ive discovered this anyhow

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

5 posted 2002-12-12 08:26 AM

romantic... yes.. this given to someone today would still be as touching...

enjoyed

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2002-12-12 08:56 AM

Aenimal
It still reads well, enjoyed.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

7 posted 2002-12-12 09:58 AM

This poem of love is far superior to any of the ones I received from my highschool sweethearts! Words such as these would have totally captivated me!

~ Bring on some more of this delicious "cheese"!

EA

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

8 posted 2002-12-12 04:40 PM

Midnite I always want the bareness you speak of..lol

Thanks passing!

Ethel what can I say i love to love

inkedgoddess Love is love but I'm still looking for my first soul mate

Sweet thing to say Cpat

Seymour thank you it's not quite my style but glad it holds up

EA that's sweet and you know what goes well with cheese? Wine you bring the bottle I'll bring the words

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

9 posted 2003-07-07 11:48 AM

Raph, I like this side of you...
this flows well, and it's sentiment is beautiful.
And AHEM it will happen...one of these days! Cause I'm your manager and I say so

Yep, this is a keeper

Melissa

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

10 posted 2004-06-06 02:23 PM

You're so cheesy! How much easier was it being a teen? sighhhhhhh

love ya cheeseball.

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

11 posted 2004-06-06 06:27 PM

you're cute when you're cheesy bello *winkies*

Enjoyed.

Mxx

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

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