Open Poetry #23 |
Emerging Angels |
EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
May those who cast Our love aside, Taste the bitter fruit of Our wounded wake, Which grows fierce as Passing Years contrive, And dismal creatures Of us make. May peace be granted to her heart. May love embrace her for her sake. This prayer now be heeded far, And a content person of her make. There is a soul within her song. May angels comfort her this night, And guard her while she sleeps so calm. May angels tell her it’s alright. Fly along, my angels, fly along. Heal the heart of whom I love, Faithful one from unseen world. Oh! tell her, sweet seraph, Oh! bringer of joy and love and peace Oh! tell her what she means to me. Let her see her wings unfurl, In all untamed entirety. I dream along, I dream tonight, I dream in shades of gray. In color and in feelings strong tommorow Is another day. I live along, I live and live, With every passing sun and moon, I breath my heart It beats I breathe, Awaited dreams will arrive soon. Soon come now, revelation lost, And dance with me so long. forever for eternity unbound and going strong! Things are not as they seem, moonbeam Soon come, I say, soon come. Sweetness follows.. Ye are Gods. Thou shall see when all is done. I tell you now, my dear beloved, To whom I’ve always been so kind. I may not remember where we came from… But I cannot leave that love behind. I have sent you nothing but angels, and I have placed nothing but miracles before you. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I live along, I live and live, With every passing sun and moon, I breath my heart It beats I breathe, Awaited dreams will arrive soon. Soon come now, revelation lost, And dance with me so long. forever for eternity unbound and going strong! Things are not as they seem, moonbeam Soon come, I say, soon come. Sweetness follows.. Ye are Gods. Thou shall see when all is done. I tell you now, my dear beloved, To whom I’ve always been so kind. I may not remember where we came from… But I cannot leave that love behind. ================================= OH MY!!!! this is SO beautiful... reads like a gospel sung prayer or a lullabye.... what a lovely inspire this is... very very cool Poet sir... I just love that closing verse...the last couplet is rhymes divine. Well done!! just one line ... one rhyme ... one metered verse ... |
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fishop Member
since 2002-09-13
Posts 79ohio |
I too enjoyed this. You have much talent mr. scorpion. I think you may want to tell her how you feel, you can't go wrong if you use words like these. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
definate beauty here |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
Tender write with a wide-awake ending--enjoyed! "And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul." |
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GOlDsparklESS Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 428central nj |
Sweetness follows.. Ye are Gods. Thou shall see when all is done. wow~ profound! as usual, i am utterly lost to try and decipher what inspires you feels like a dream |
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