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Radrook
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since 2002-08-09
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0 posted 2002-12-11 08:14 PM


I am the last eagle
My wings are two scraggy pinions.
My blunted beak is a sickly
cask brittle yellow.

The mocking winds now flail furiously against my atrophied frame.

In the gnarled blurred distances
I still hear avian anthems echoing amidst ruined gothic cathedrals.

Yet,
their cherubs still knell a deafening silence
within which I have been summoned to die.


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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2002-12-11 09:30 PM


Oh...what a terrible thing to lose this precious gift.  A powerful work. ThisDiamond
Radrook
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since 2002-08-09
Posts 648

2 posted 2002-12-12 01:47 AM


Hi!
Thanks for the feedback.
At the rate we are exterminating species we are going to be alone pretty soon. Well, maybe that's what we really want--isolation. After all, privacy is a very precious thing to us humans.

GOlDsparklESS
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since 2001-12-13
Posts 428
central nj
3 posted 2002-12-12 12:51 PM


Yet,
their cherubs still knell a deafening silence
within which I have been summoned to die.


what an intense reality you portray

O' to be delivered from the realm of the rational into pure song...

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