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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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knowing before you even see it believing before you think some things embedded in my mind have i been here before or did i pay attention to the dreams have i known you before i recognise this place though i know i've never been you've said that before in the exact time and place i knew i shouldnt have gone that voice told me in my brain we dont listen enough to what we already know we dismiss and discard it as fokelore and pretend though i'm not sure how you open it when you hear the faintest whisper strain your ear and listen on far from insane knowledge that never fails to prove you wrong until you give it recognition natural unseen socialized to ignore it life saving life changing gift of listening to soul to self to intuition. learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
self intuition... an interesting thought here and we do tend to ignore those "gut" feelings we have, shake off the coincidences... I enjoyed |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
good thoughts about doubting our instincts at times |
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fishop Member
since 2002-09-13
Posts 79ohio |
I find I do much better if I do question my instincts. Nice read.  |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
How very true gem, great advice and very well written. raph |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I doubt everything, I guess. Good poem here. Made me think. |
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