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MARK V SHELDON
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0 posted 2002-12-11 01:02 PM


"TWENTY OR LESS...#107"

Copyright 2002 by:  MARK V SHELDON


Uncle's medal

Children without war

"AS ABOVE SO BELOW"

© Copyright 2002 Mark V Sheldon - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-12-11 01:04 PM



BAM!

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2 posted 2002-12-11 01:05 PM


nice... can be read in different ways to mean different things. As usual.. I am impressed.


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3 posted 2002-12-11 01:10 PM




(big hugggsssssss) The way which I intrepreted this was the uncle trying to tell his nephew and niece of his story in the war, but the children failing to understand the tears he feels as such a war has not affected their lives! (sigh) This is powerful, sweet friend, I think this also can be read multiple ways, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Mark, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2002-12-11 01:11 PM


MARK,
Good one.

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...EXCELLENT!!...

~ Season's Greetings to everyone at Passions ~

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MARK V SHELDON
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7 posted 2002-12-11 01:55 PM


Sunshine:  ...better than BOOM...

Thanks, Ron -- just a simple thought...

Noah:  Ah yes -- I've heard Uncle Sam tell such stories before...

Sy -- graci.

Nancy...  aw shucks...

Kacy:

-MVS

"AS ABOVE SO BELOW"

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