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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Take me home Today Let me steal your heart away Let me take you Before It Is too late Let me make you happy Let me take your hand Walk with me Into this light Let me be yours Tonight Let the time stay long Open the door Let me steal your love away Let me show my feelings Let me give your reasons Take me Into your heart Take me [This message has been edited by vandana (12-11-2002 11:05 AM).] |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Heard the restless heartbeat of this one... Well done. ThisDiamond |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
tender plea... and if shared should touch the one it is written for.. I enjoyed |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Vandana, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I hope your sweetheart hears this request and lets you share this loves joy with him! (big hugggssssss) I wish the best for you, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah, now THERE is some growth showing in this one, Vandana! Wonderful! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I hope you are allowed to love like this...this is beautiful |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
I don't believe anyone could turn this down. I like the demand sound with the luring..very well done. ~Salty In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you. |
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Robert Adamson Member
since 2002-10-21
Posts 328PA/USA |
I like this style of writing because each word means more. Also, I think about how kind the subject must be to give as she does. Thanking you. etoodog |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
"Let the time stay long.."...there have been occasions when I've wished for that with all my heart...Vandana, this was a stirring read for me...thank you!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
vandana - well expressed write. Searching yet to find would be the way... BC |
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