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MARK V SHELDON
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0 posted 2002-12-10 10:48 PM


"TWENTY OR LESS...#106"

Copyright 2002 by:MARK V SHELDON


I found her laugh delicious
A symmetric code
Soft and toned
With the young effects
Of love
And desire


"AS ABOVE SO BELOW"

© Copyright 2002 Mark V Sheldon - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-12-10 11:10 PM


( smiling) ah... enjoyed this...

nicely done

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2 posted 2002-12-11 12:17 PM


tasting a smile
in stereod lips...

curved pillows
mouthing
morning's taste...

first dew

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3 posted 2002-12-11 02:35 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is so lovely, sweet friend, I always love the gorgeous gems you post as I wish this love to always fill your heart! (big hugggsssssss) This shines with youth, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Mark, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2002-12-11 03:02 PM


ah, to be young again...sigh
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5 posted 2002-12-11 04:21 PM


ah to date a young one again..lol My last relationship was with someone younger who alternately made me feel young again and impossibly old. Love the poem Mark and the laugh rings clear in my mind, tis truly a beautiful thing.

raph

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6 posted 2002-12-11 04:47 PM


Beautiful...brought a smile to my lips today.
~Hugs~

~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~

MARK V SHELDON
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7 posted 2002-12-11 05:40 PM


Ron, a smile is worth all the price of admission...  Thank you, my friend.

Kacy -- what a wonderful way to "wake up"...

Noah...  as long as they sparkle, I'll keep mining more.

Passing Shadows:  A great wisdom someone once told me:  "It's ok to grow old -- as long as you never grow up."  Real youth is in outlook...  

Raph...  it always does and always will be.

...and how well that smile compliments your visage, Nancy!

-MVS

"AS ABOVE SO BELOW"

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