Open Poetry #23 |
Touching Me |
Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
“TOUCHING ME”’ by Bill Charles ~~~~ When I was young I believed love would touch me in ways I only dreamed of, but then I saw you, and my eyes beheld your beauty… Now I wonder if you would teach me about tenderness, softness, and emotions I always dreamed about and more… Through the years I’ve wondered, and now that I’ve seen you I wonder even more, if you would touch me with you… ~~~~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Bill this is so sweet and loving. Well done. Hugs. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Bill...Romantically beautiful. ~Hugs~ ~ Life is too short not to believe in Santa Claus ~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Bill, this is so lovely, sweet friend, and may your golden heart always be touched with true loves words! (big hugggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Oh Bill, from what I've read in your poems, no one needs to teach you 'about tenderness, softness, and emotions.' You are the master of love and romance. Huggles of Cheer, Marti |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bill I agree with Marti...you got tender romance down! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Tender and touching Bill. hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
This is absolutely beautiful....especially loved the last line. Very Nice write!! ~Salty In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
bill, you seem to be quite capable of teaching too, this is heavenly |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Bill, this is beuatiful. Thank you for sharing. "Love makes the world go around" |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Bill, beautiful lines! |
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fishop Member
since 2002-09-13
Posts 79ohio |
Now I wonder if you would teach me about tenderness, softness, and emotions I always dreamed about and more… She'll teach you allright, but you'r gonna have to wing most of it. Nice job. Go get her. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Yes Bill, It takes two to tango; we all know how you love to dance. May you find a partner equally as romantic as yourself, giving back to you all the tender heartedness you project to us in your wonderful poetry. Thank you. Warm regards, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
...perhaps, if there weren't so many miles between us! tehe ~ You sure know how to get hearts to flutter EA |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
I agree with Linda If only we lived closer, I'd reach out and touch ya, sans the phone. A wonderfully sweet write Bill.. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Bill, it's always good to know that you haven't lost your touch!!! Enjoyed...~~S~~ |
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