Open Poetry #23 |
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Christmas Eve Candles |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania ![]() |
Christmas Eve Candles Miniature Christmas tree, glittering gold An eye of desire to come in from the cold Icicle windows with glistening glaze Sparkle in candle wick's magical daze Holly wreath prickles right down to the core With tickly tingles that beckon and lure A finger to chime out a welcoming grin And pass into homey aromas within Little feet enter in small pitter pats Rosy cheeks bundled with hoods over hats Mistletoe hanging alone in the door Unnoticed by hugs and warm kisses galore Succulence oozes from brown roasted bird Opulent stuffing with raison nut herb Yams cooked in syrup and cinnamon spice Laughter of children and tinkling ice Candle wax dripping in tapering tears Flicker the memories of life’s richest years Love long ago brings a smile’s reminisce My table today edged with comfort and bliss Candy canes, cookies with sugary gleams Around a Scotch pine swirling childhood dreams Boughs are adorned with the flutter of wings In stillness the angels pluck mystical strings Christmas is wrapped in a glittering bow In Santa Clause wishes and fireplace glow Lights hugging branches of needly pine Love in a package that only is mine A star shines upon us from evergreen’s height Through ages of men it has given us Light The glory of Christ and a birth we esteem Shines brighter each year through the branches of green Unwrapped is the pleasure of small sleepy eyes My heart is unfolded as ribbon unties Abundant the joy with each hug and each kiss The best of a lifetime are the moments like this Now on with the mittens and out to the car May your dreams be the visions from under a star May Christmas bestow you the richness of love From Santa Clause parents and Light from above Elizabeth Santos 12/10/2002 [This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (12-10-2002 11:25 AM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What a coming home read this is, Lady Santos...you make it seem too real...like a bubble about to burst...more than lovely, it's designed to be a ![]() |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Liz a beautiful write with the warmth of the season. Hugs to you, and happy holidays. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, Now that is a generous christmas portion. Full of goodies and filled without caution. Your writing is always a delight Especially on a Christmas night. Enjoyed |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
You set a beautiful table, it's bounty warmth and love. As always you've done well, rest a spell in the glow of this fire. |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Very, very beautiful and heartwarming, Elizabeth... ![]() ![]() ![]() "Love makes the world go around" |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What a beautiful picture you've painted with your words. *S* I like this very much! *S* |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
If there were one person in the world I would choose to write a Christmas poem it would be you, Liz. This poem proves me right... ![]() |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Elizabeth....this is a treasure! What an enjoyable read... Into the library it goes! ~Hugs~ ~ Life is too short not to believe in Santa Claus ~ |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (smiles) Oh Elizabeth, this is so gorgeous, sweet friend, yay!!! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all wish you the happiest holidays, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Elizabeth, thank you for sharing! ![]() ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enotneicna Member
since 1999-06-06
Posts 340Oakland, Or, USA |
This is truly a most bountiful gift.....Thank you!!!! Many the Holidays bring you peace, joy, love and happiness. Many blessings Always Eno Words are my medicine. |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I miss all of you ![]() |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sunshine, This is my CHristmas Eve. On Christmas Day I'm in a bathrobe til noon, then go see what Santa Brought for the kids. THank you, sweet lady Gentle Spirit, THank you,I'm glad you were warmed by this verse Happy hollidays! Sy, That you, master poet for the sweet verse. Lots of goodies, but no beer on CHristmas Eve,,, RS, I liked your response, and yes, I will rest in the glow, and savor evey moment, as I do every day. Thank you garysgirl, THank you,glad it warmwed your heart suthern, Thank you, dear southern lady. May your holiday be blessed with lots of good things. Wish you could come here sometime Balladeer, THank you, my friend, I only tell it like it is. A bubble about to burst! Enchantress, This poem will be honored to sit in your library. It says, THank You! Noah, As the twinkling lights of Christmas, you light up this forum. THank you, dear poet Eno, Thank you for the warm comments. Happy holidays to you and yours. Mysteria, THank you, dear, I feel a warm breeze coming down from Canada and touching my Christmas with love Merry Christmas! Liz |
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Moonlight Romeo![]() ![]()
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
A light that warms, and leaves the heart feeling. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
![]() Needs to be "felt" again. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
now that's what I call Christmas! |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Liz, this is just beautiful. I've read it several times and just love it more with each read. :... Now on with the mittens and out to the car May your dreams be the visions from under a star ...' Fantastic words. Hugs, Marti |
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Elizabeth![]() ![]()
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Liz this is beautiful ![]() ![]() God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
This sounds like something you should read to the kids sitting around a warm fire while sipping hot chocolate. Love the warm fuzzies from this read. ~Salty In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you. |
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