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Dawn’s Hope
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Dawn’s Hope |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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Dawn’s Hope When dawn stands ready to flood the day With sun kissed light and morning ray I will hear your voice stirring in me Speaking to my soul of love’s clarity Although it’s hard to walk without you I will try to do all that you asked me to Light will not fade from my heart’s sky I’ll not cede my soul to tears hopeless cry When the night begins to fade to day And greyness mist over my soul does lay I will seek the light that you left with me Lifting my eyes to see it shine clearly Despair won’t come stalking my mind Regret and rue I’ve left far far behind Tears won’t chain me to shadowy night I shall open my heart to the sun’s new light When the sky’s dawning smile first appears I will bid farewell to my soul’s tears You asked me to smile for your sake And that smile shall banish all heartache Sunset and shadows can’t hold me long You taught me to sing my heart’s song The path to the future is waiting for me And each step forward is a small victory Sun light shall reflect in my misty eyes As onward I go toward dawn’s new skies Marsha Breathe through the heat of our desire Thy coolness and they balm Let sense be dumb let flesh retire Speak through the earthquake wind and fire [This message has been edited by Marsha (12-10-2002 09:12 AM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"Tears won’t chain me to shadowy night I shall open my heart to the sun’s new light" Beautifully said, Marsha! Happy holidays to you and the family, and please keep writing your unique mushies. [This message has been edited by Midnitesun (12-10-2002 09:51 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marsha Your tallent is showing, excellent write. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes, Sy is right... your talent IS showing...  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
You asked me to smile for your sake And that smile shall banish all heartache very beautiful and filled with love hugs M |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetMarshaLove~ Knowing the intend from the heart, makes this particularly poignantly tender~  There is sunlight amid shadows as you reach each bend in your heartpath~ Reaching out and *hugging* you every day~ 'J' is so very fortunate to have loved you~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Marsha a beautiful and tender write from your heart done with your excellent style and perfection. Hugs. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
A very sweet write from a very sweet gal.... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Sunset and shadows can’t hold me long You taught me to sing my heart’s song The path to the future is waiting for me And each step forward is a small victory Yes. *S* This is beautiful, Marsha... that heart's song is a melody worth hearing. *S* |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Dappled sunlight on green is not as poetically moving as this. Mushy my love you do my heart proud and J must be lifted by your strength and courage. when the night is still fleeting, hold on and your heart's in God's keeping, be strong though you must feel like weeping, walk tall cuase your heart is still beating, through all all the tears that are flowing, now gone I will hold you and love you, along *HuGS* Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Sy and Sunshine are right ....your talent is showing.....nicely done! |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
Oh Marsha, you do have a way of getting to my heart. we who have loved and lost and still love know how this feels. --------------------------------------- Sun light shall reflect in my misty eyes As onward I go toward dawn’s new skies --------------------------------------- Such a beautiful thought. and I am not dry eyed over here either. Haunting and beautiful. Sherry  Cherish the good memories of the past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. But above all... be kind to yourself today. |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Marsha, loving lady, those were beautiful words straight from your big heart.  TitiaLike scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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