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Midnitesun

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0 posted 2002-12-09 09:06 PM

Kickin back,
makin strides,
flingin flecks of mud,
tannin hides.

Rode a horse
out of town,
danced in the mud
in a wedding gown.
Solo dancer
left bolo prancer,
cowboy heart
bent Cupid's dart.
Rode a horse
out of town,
gave him back
his wedding gown.

Ridin high,
waved goodbye,
cowgirl sings the blues.
Read it in the news.
Packed guitar
hit the road
to travel far.
Kickin back,
makin strides.
Flingin flecks
of mud
in your eyes
won't cover
all those
cowboy lies.

Cowgirl
sings
the blues,

"Hit the road, Jack"

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (12-09-2002 09:07 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-12-09 09:15 PM

Great work Midnite! Great flow and a feeling of empowerment.

Midnitesun

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2 posted 2002-12-09 09:18 PM

SHH, Raph, you'll make a cowgirl blush.

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3 posted 2002-12-09 09:24 PM

Really enjoyed this. Yes, empowerment, but so much more with the descriptive lines. Great!

Hugs and warm regards, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

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4 posted 2002-12-09 09:26 PM

And doncha come back, no more, no more!!!!

Like this one....good words....

Midnitesun

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5 posted 2002-12-09 09:30 PM

Pat, empowerment is...highly overrated.
Thanks for the reply.

Magnus, LOL, I knew someone would sing to me.

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6 posted 2002-12-10 12:57 PM

You old flingin' mud-flecker, you!

This is great! LOL! Put a burr under that cowboy's saddle! I don't think there's a cowpoke alive who can fence you in

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7 posted 2002-12-10 01:18 AM

Kacy, I like this. It's cute, and yeah, I was singing to myself.....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

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8 posted 2002-12-10 01:58 AM

what a song this would make! Wow!

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