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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2002-12-09 11:30 AM



serving up time
for which I have none
leaves me in between
these lines

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garysgirl
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1 posted 2002-12-09 11:41 AM


Maureen, I know the feeling very well.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2002-12-09 11:43 AM


Maureen,
You often say more inbetween then on line.
Enjoyed

Salty
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3 posted 2002-12-09 12:09 PM


as words unspoken sometimes carry the strongest message.  


*NICELY DONE m & M*


~Salty

In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you.
--Deepak Chop

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
4 posted 2002-12-09 12:30 PM


Thank you and yes, SY

most of my meaning is really between the lines


M

Pilgrimage
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5 posted 2002-12-09 12:37 PM


This is subtle, and very good. I enjoyed reading it.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

nakdthoughts
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6 posted 2002-12-09 12:53 PM


Hi Nan where have you been hiding.

I hope you are well
hugsss
M

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7 posted 2002-12-09 02:33 PM


I feel that too sometimes
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