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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2002-12-09 12:52 PM


A Kiss Goodnight

Met a woman in the middle of the night.
I kissed her once and she said kiss me twice.
And then she said she wanted me
to tuck her into bed.
That's what she said.
It was a big brass bed.
With a fancy floral bedspread.
With huge fluffy pillows
and soft silky sheets.
She said be sweet
and rub my feet.
Nothing more.
She fell asleep.
Her night complete.
She began to snore.
I was disappointed.
I wanted more.
In the middle
of the night
I kissed her
goodnight.

JamesLee
December08
2002



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BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
1 posted 2002-12-09 01:59 AM


Kind of anti-climatic huh?
But a good foot rub is hard to beat!  

more....or less~  



catalinamoon
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2 posted 2002-12-09 08:23 PM


Cute, James. And such a gentleman you are
Sandra

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3 posted 2002-12-09 11:41 PM




(big hugggssssssss) We all have those kind of days, but things will get better, she just had a worser day is all and truly does appreciate the wonderful person you are! (sigh) I send angel hugs your way, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2002-12-10 08:03 AM


*s  made me smile and  then feel a bit sorry for you..and her for what she was missing.

hugs
M

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