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A Letter To The Rain-god
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A Letter To The Rain-god |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
For I recall the cut of you, so well defined And I would catch the scent of you in crowded rooms A vintage gold, in silence it enraptured me to drunken heights In just so few, each opportunity to hear you brought to water Deep and dear like velvet on my ear, in shiver down my neck And I can merely tell you of these waves, for I am lost at sea If ever you were near, my heart would swim Drinking in oceans, overflowing salty streams At times escaping of my lips these thoughts that bathed the surface For I recall the play that drenched to bone my fantasies And laughter that we shared in simplest of terms and times Like water on the garden, or rain upon the pine in spring If ever you were near, no dearer than you came to be And I can touch the edges of a feeling that has filled my sails For I recall the man in every wondrous way...there is only you Copyright Kkh 12/08/02 |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Oh My! Romantic, sensual...such allure! Absolutely loved this! WIHWT |
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Krystopher Morris Member
since 2002-11-11
Posts 130Ancient land called Chivalry |
Very interesting. Thanks for Sharing! Poetry is love and love is life. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Perfectly beautiful Kathleen! Much enjoyed the read. ~Hugs~ ~ Life is too short not to believe in Santa Claus ~ |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I loved the way your words shimmer and the terms of endearment in this!! Very nice Diamond Lady~ |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
Excellent! Soft, tender images--left me with a sigh--enjoyed! "And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul." |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Intriguing title, "A Letter To The Rain-god"----drew me in and I wasn't disappointed! Enjoyed this gently expressed piece of poetic writing! EA |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
This is perfectly beautiful and so well versed. Love it! Warm regards, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
ThisDiamond - yes, you are a diamond indeed. Your writing is suburb... BC |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Need a 'brella? Sending via FEDEX.... You are such an interesting and intriguing personna.... Your poetry grasps and tugs, and at the same time...waits till we are off balance...then..........tugs again!!! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, yay, this had me feel like singing in the rain, yay! (kiss on cheek) You always write such downfalls of beauty in your words and rainstorms of colors, sweet friend, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Excellent imagery, diamond lady..you have a wonderful style  |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Very beautiful, Kathleen. I enjoyed very much.  "Love makes the world go around" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow....just in awe here |
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