»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #23
»
Night's Mist
| Open Poetry #23 |
|
Night's Mist |
|
|
Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
|
“NIGHT'S MIST” by Bill Charles ~~~~ Whispers of breath tender in evening silent, silhouettes dancing in moonbeams not veiled, but shadowed in thoughts of desire for lover's touch, out of the night's mist... ~~~~ |
||
| © Copyright 2002 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved | |||
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
And the wolf....once whispered softly into the mist....come here my treat....I await.. Let's howl the moon!!! Ah BC...Hey buddy....you are realy getting good at this, but you know that already, dontcha!!?? |
||
|
Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Simply beautiful Bill. Much enjoyed. ~Hugs~ ~ Life is too short not to believe in Santa Claus ~ |
||
|
regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Bill, ...."dancing in moonbeans".... Nice image. Love the poem. You are so good at these romantic treasures. They are a treat. Warm regards, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
||
vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
yes,my friend you're good at writing like this keep writing  |
||
|
inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
yes, bill, rock on quite intriguing |
||
|
Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Nice work, 'mist'er Charles! |
||
|
Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Soft and romantic, Bill. Enjoyed! |
||
garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Bill, yes...dancing by the moonbeams and under the stars...very good thoughts...  "Love makes the world go around" |
||
|
Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Bill... I bet all the ladies will swoon over this 'misty' write. "YOU DA MAN"...Paul " To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you " [This message has been edited by Paul Wilson (12-09-2002 02:21 AM).] |
||
|
BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
not veiled, but shadowed in Ooooooooo this was just beautiful BC~ *swooning* |
||
|
Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Bill... A very wistful; yet tender rendering. As always...so very romantic. EXCELLENT WRITING!!! ***Ivy Rose |
||
|
Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
'tis that soft touch we all desire--lovely! "And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul." |
||
|
Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Yay! Awwwwwwwww, this is soooooo lovely, sweet friend, I wish for true loves beauty to always fill your heart with golden happiness! (big huggssssss) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
||
|
NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Oh BC, the thought of 'dancing in moonlight' is such a romantic notion. Unfortunately, we'd freeze and crack in this neck of the woods. Beautifully written, I enjoyed it so much. Hugs, Marti 'A witty saying proves nothing.' |
||
|
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I read Marti's poem that was inspired by this one of yours. I was working my way to yours but I had to jump ahead and pop into this one now! Golly gee! I can see how she had gain some inspiration after reading this poem! It has given me some inspiration as well.........oh, well, since that will not be on the agenda for this evening, I'll save this poem for a night when it can work its moon magic! tehe ~ But on this cold December night in the frigid north, I will just have to visualize myself twirling round and round in strong arms, lit by the beams of the luminescent moon. EA |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
