Open Poetry #23 |
A Castle (A Limerick, maybe) |
SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
He went to build himself a castle On top of it he even put a tassle All purple and pink Without even a sink It was built in a town called Newcastle © By Sue 10/20/01 |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Good start. there once was a man from Newcastle which built a round house- no hassle but, he got to thinking when his socks started stinking with no windows- it’s a capsule ping |
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Computer Junior Member
since 2002-12-08
Posts 10Norfolk, NE |
There once was a man from ... nevermind. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I love to see your spirits picking up and writing such a fun poem! You really are on the mend, dear sweet Sue! ~ Big smile and a huge hug! Linda |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Sue, I'm so happy to see you writing these playful upbeat poems, sweet friend, I hope things are improving for you as I wish you great joy and for you to feel like the princess of your castle on the rainbow! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hey sweet friend, I'm also glad to see you writing these cute poems. This one is delightful. Thanks for sharing. "Love makes the world go around" |
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