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A Guitar Playing Mood
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A Guitar Playing Mood |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“A GUITAR PLAYING MOOD” by Bill Charles ~~~~ Been wanting to talk with you, or perhaps sing a soft tune… Especially when you’re close, like you are this afternoon… Brushed the silk of your hair, kissed you on your soft lips… Gazed into lovely sensual eyes, traced you with my fingertips… But I’m in a guitar playing mood, as you do different things to me… Thought I’d play it for awhile, whatever happens, we’ll see… I picked up that sweet instrument, chords came from out of nowhere… Just getting with the feeling, you and I, this music, an affair… ~~~~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sounds like your afternoon was a lot more interesting than mine was! The only hands I had on my body were those of a massage therapist--and that's a woman! haha Lovely poem. Think I'll go hug my guitar! EA [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (10-16-2002 10:56 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Mingling strings even as we cannot touch.. my guitar slides in tune with yours attentively in tone and time .. sound-kissing before chords slip over neck and body toward a rush of song. Nice one Bill.... ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Bill, this was very good...very romantic. I liked it. Thanks for sharing. Love To All, Ethel |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) This is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, now croon those blues and let the guitar reverberate through your hearts always with undercurrents of heaven! (big hugggsssss) I love it, sweet friend, this is gorgeous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bill Loved the play with music and romance. |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Bill, This is so sweet. I can hear the melody on the guitar as I was reading it. I miss having someone to play their guitar for me. I so want to learn to play, but I need to learn how to hold a guitar even before I can play one. hehe.. Dawn |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
There are always the right strings to touch. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Bill, Well done enjoyed the read. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
A simple but romantic expression of time spent in the company of a loved one...very eloquently done |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Been in that mood a bunch of times...this is really a nice write Bill |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
A delightful, romantic piece Bill ... sets a wonderful mood. Very much enjoyed!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
BC, I can hear your sweet music from here. Lovely ... Hugs, Marti Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Brushed the silk of your hair, kissed you on your soft lips… Gazed into lovely sensual eyes, traced you with my fingertips this was such an inviting verse, Bill I enjoyed your words this morning hugs M |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
I think that I shall not see a guitar and its player in quite the same way again. Well-woven, sensual! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Poetic skill AND musical talent to boot. Such a combination. Well done. Bob |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is very beautiful, Bill. *S* I can't play anything but CD's... but I sure love to listen. *S* |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Bill other than the few chords my dad taught me when I got my guitar and a few rock and roll licks a few friends taught me, I can't play the darn thing. I bet it sounds great played by you. Wonderful write. |
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