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Open Poetry #23

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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2002-12-07 05:14 PM

evening enters
with a whisper
on the sky,
in dreamlike
swirls
of pastels
without names,
deepening with
the hour,
into blazen colors
that scream
of the suns demise
until it fades
beneath the
now black sky,
silent again
until morning

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

1 posted 2002-12-07 05:19 PM

that scream
of the suns demise

Love this poem.
I've always adored poems that personify things we take for granted.

amusemi
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

2 posted 2002-12-07 05:28 PM

wonderful

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

3 posted 2002-12-07 05:30 PM

I'm blinded by the light of this poem and deafened by its screams, lol. I loved this piece of work, it "spoke" to me.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

4 posted 2002-12-07 06:40 PM

inkedgoddess - with your words during the night it would not be silence until morning...

BC

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