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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space 
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The winds shift and I catch the scent of you stalking within the tall grass of subconsciousness These days I'm not as agile as I used to be A lame and weary target for your infected thoughts I bolt and escape though, never unscathed You seldom fail to tear a piece from me I grow weary of these hunts And sometimes I am enclined to let these thoughts devour me [This message has been edited by Aenimal (12-07-2002 01:43 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Sometimes the best way is to not run but try and sympathize with that which is hunting you and hope to get on its good side if it truly is a hunter! (sigh) What doesn't kill you only makes you stronger, I send angel hugs of comfort your way, we all love youn so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Raphael, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Raph: VERY cool metaphors here! I appreciate the unique analogies, and hey -- at least you bolt! -MVS "AS ABOVE SO BELOW" |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I too enjoyed the metaphors and thought you could read this two ways, and when I got to thinking it was the hairy type of wolf, I remember the crocodile hunter saying to "puff yourself up and look huge", stand tall, still and firm, and all I could think of was - run for the hills, and funny enough that applies to both ways I read this LOL, enjoyed! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 you unbolted the door and bolted. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Raph, a very good poem. I like the thoughts that you come up with. Thank you for sharing those thoughts and feelings with us.  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Noah thank you sometimes I won my battles with my psyche, sometimes it gets the jump on me. In time i hope.. Mark I sometimes bolt, it's something i've learned to do over time, but sometimes i fear the damage is already too great to reverse Mysteria glad you liked it. I love the crocodile hunter, he's such a child and so innocent. I try Midnite I try.. Ethel thank you for always supporting me its much appreciated  |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Enjoyed the read ... it's seldom, a good time, being stalked or hunted ~ Rex |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Fight with all your heart, never let you mind give in to evil thoughts...Paul |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Thank you Rex for your words, no not fun at all being hunted Paul thank you very kind words, I try I try |
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