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BigFellow
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0 posted 2002-12-05 04:30 PM



  I saw a girl,
with hair of curl
so full, thick, and fuzzy.

I stopped to stare,
at so much hair,
and it made my head feel buzzy.

I blinked once or twice,
thought of something nice,
then pulled out my pair of Fiskar's.

I said, “Let’s have some fun",
and when it was done,
she was only covered with whisker's!


[This message has been edited by BigFellow (12-05-2002 05:09 PM).]

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Toerag
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1 posted 2002-12-05 05:00 PM


Prune her?...And that was just for her legs and underarms I'll bet?...LOL...sounds like an idea to me.....welcome to Passions...

[This message has been edited by Toerag (12-05-2002 05:01 PM).]

Dark Angel
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2 posted 2002-12-05 05:18 PM


LOL

enjoyed, thanks  for the giggle. ill be looking out for more.


Welcome To Passions.

Maree

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3 posted 2002-12-05 05:49 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
Thanks for the giggles with your first post.
I'll be looking forward to more of your work.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~ Life is too short not to believe in Santa Claus ~

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2002-12-05 08:16 PM




(giggles in delight) Oh my gosh, I just love this, sweet friend, this is sooooooooo cute, yay, this is a cute and adorable debut, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspire dby your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Elimeno P
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5 posted 2002-12-06 11:51 PM


Fiskars are the absolute best!  Bought 2 pair at Sam's club last week.  And I used to have a cat named Whiskers.  Your poem spoke to me in ways I don't think you intended, but I really enjoyed!

EP

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Gaia
6 posted 2002-12-07 09:31 AM


HAHAHA. Now back off and put those Fiskars down! I already had my haircut for this year.

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
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7 posted 2002-12-07 12:20 PM


A delightful first post, thank you for a smile.  Welcome to Passions.  Enjoy your time among these blue walls of Ron's home.
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
8 posted 2002-12-07 12:23 PM


BigFellow
Welcome and I enjoyed the read.

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
9 posted 2002-12-08 09:01 AM



Welcome to Passions, BigFellow.  Now, is this a play on LongFellow, I presume?
No matter, we're going to enjoy your
wit and pun.  Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound

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