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John (1940-1980)
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John (1940-1980) |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space 
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Holden Caulfield * and a .38 Four claps of thunder in a New York sky The tranquility of December raped A body lays on the steps of the Dakota eyes closed in familiar wireframe rims as if in dream and Yoko screaming Candles and prayers could repel deaths icy hand The earth mourns a beloved son the working class hero the people's poet Who fought for peace and life but was robbed of his own His spirit has never died it lives on still in the hearts of the oppressed, the voice of the voiceless forever John A poor tribute I know, but the topic is too close to heart. Though I was only four at the time and didn't understand the full extent of the tragedy, I grew to understand just what a terrible loss it was. His music and words have enriched my life and were a guiding force in my love of writing and music. They helped me through many tough times and I am forever greatful. Thank you John * Killer Mark David Chapman believed he was the protagonist of The Catcher in the Rye.. [This message has been edited by Aenimal (12-07-2002 04:47 AM).] |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
stop putting your stuff down, kid, really, look amongst you, youre in good company here.......... your passion and admiration for the artist come across loud and clear i was 26, had my first baby, 2 weeks before he died and was going thru some crazy post-partum blues at the time (then again, what am i telling you this for....)  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Raph, this is a fine tribute. Thank you for sharing this one, as John Lennon is still one of the greatest songwriters to ever walk this planet. For me, his music is as alive today as it was then. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Very well stated and written. His music touched the lives of many. Can you imagine the world without the song Imagine? He was a talent that we all treasure, thank you for this. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
A great recounting and tribute.  ...Imagine... |
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Krystopher Morris Member
since 2002-11-11
Posts 130Ancient land called Chivalry |
Wasn't born till eight years after. You shouldn't put yourself down for this all. He was a great man and he left us all with a very imaginative world and beautiful music. Poetry is love and love is life. |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Raph, what a beautifully written tribute to such an excellent writer and musician.  BTW, friend, you are a VERY talented poet, who writes from your heart. The feelings and compassion that comes forth through your writing is very touching. Quit putting yourself down, friend.  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Automatic self depreciation its something I'm working on, thank you for the encouragment and basically telling me to shut up and write already. Inkedgoddess thanks for the info I always find it interesting to see where people where at the time. Thank you midnite he was and always will be one of the greatest artists and personalities of our time. Gentle Spirit I cannot imagine a world any of his beatles or solo work..thank you Thank you Nancy for the kind words and a beautiful image Kristopher thank you his legacy will live on forever i hope Thank you Ethel your words always brighten my day Thanks again for the kind words and all the encouragement  [This message has been edited by Aenimal (12-07-2002 12:09 PM).] |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Dear one -- Don't put yourself down. Be proud of what you write! This is a loving and kindly tribute to a great fallen man. A day a bright star was snuffed out; sadly for all, young and old. Hugs, Marti 'A witty saying proves nothing.' |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssssss) Oh Raphael, this is such a beautiful and compassionate dedication to one of the best songwriters of all time, sweet friend, I too think his songs will always live on and there is a little John Lennon in all of us, if only we can all imagine and frolic in the strawberry fields like him! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Raphael, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Thank you for reminding us of this talented gentleman....he had so much more to give to us... believe in what your heart feels... |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
This is simply wonderful - I loved him then and still do. His music will live on forever. Well done. Seasons Greetings from Canada eh! [This message has been edited by Mysteria (12-07-2002 04:46 PM).] |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Thank you Marti thanks for the kind words I'm glad you like it Thanks Noah! His spirit lives on! Scorpio may we never forget him, thank you for reading it Thank you Mysteria and seasons greetings from the other end of the country you hoser lol MARK The power of music has been a guiding force and a saviour in my life [This message has been edited by Aenimal (12-08-2002 04:25 AM).] |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
As long as he's remembered, loved, and respected, he will live on, and Noah's words struck me just now -- "there is a little John Lennon in all of us"... Such is the power of music... (and poetry...) -MVS "AS ABOVE SO BELOW" |
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