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Open Poetry #23

She (Perfect)

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2002-12-06 11:22 PM

She (Perfect)

Perfect face.
Perfect personality.
Perfect shape.
Perfect sensuality.
Perfect lips
to provide a
perfect kiss.
There's something wrong here.
I'm not sure what's amiss.
But I intend to get to
the bottom of this.

JamesLee
December06
2002

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2002-12-06 11:25 PM

Nobody's perfect James...
but sounds like she's pretty close to it.
Good write.
~Hugs~

~ Life is too short not to believe in Santa Claus ~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2002-12-06 11:28 PM

Thank you Enchantress for responding...I'm going to find out whats going on...James

Elimeno P
Junior Member

since 2002-12-06

Posts 17
The only place I want to be!

3 posted 2002-12-06 11:32 PM

Yep, probably something dear!

Perfect ex-husbands (all 3 of them)
and
Perfect Children (all 5 of them)
and
Perfect debts (more than $24,000 down)

*teasing*...her perfect assets are worth it though! hahaha This is a very whimsical poem and I like it.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2002-12-09 12:15 PM

Thanks Elimino...I can usually make a judgement right away about liking what I see on the outside but it takes a while to get to know what's on the inside...and sometimes there not who you think they are...James

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-12-09 11:46 PM

(big hugggssssss) Oh James, no one is perfect but as long as a love is faithful and makes you feel special, it truly feels like its perfect and I hope this is the one! (sigh) I send angel hugs of strength your way, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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