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Come My Love
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Come My Love |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Come my love, take my hand and I will lead you to a higher knowledge you won't have yet learned. Come my sweetheart, I'll dance and twirl your center to dizzying heights and I will be your net, as you fall, exploding into me. Let me teach you the twists and turns of where our love can skip in beat, with hearts thumping and souls laughing, to have dared this unique dance of the knowledge of one another. I whisper, Come my love, and make us whole. . . ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
...Exquisite!!... |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Pat, I love this. It's a different style for you and it fits you perfectly. Enjoyed very much.  "Love makes the world go around" |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
regards2you~ This is absolutely gorgeous. I truly enjoyed the read.  Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
A beautiful invitation!! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Oh yeah... This is really very intimate and honest. Pleasure to read you. ThisDiamond |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Patricia, this is lovely, sweet friend, it takes two to tango so may you and your love teach each other the techniques to this graceful dance of life! (kiss on cheek) I love it, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Patricia, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
That was an amazing poem. Soft and warm. Simply beautiful. WinterWren |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Pat - truly, honestly and heavenly. Terrific writing. Loved it. Hugs, Marti 'A witty saying proves nothing.' |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
James, Thanks for replying. Glad you enjoyed. Enchantress, Thank you! Wonderful thing for you to say. Ethel, Glad you love it. I noticed, (at least) to me, that there weren't many poems written by women, from a woman's perspective of how she loves a man... what he does to her, but, not visa versa. So this is the second attempt to capture such. Am writing from mind rather than a specific experience and that seems to be working as well. Vickey, Absolutely gorgeous? Thank you, smiling here. Sandpiper, Yes, it is an invitation, and I had fun writing it. Glad you thought it beautiful. Vandana, Glad you enjoyed. ThisDiamond, So glad you enjoyed reading. Thank you for taking the time and for the reply Noah, Yes, it takes two to tango, and as soon as my love shows up in life, about the only dance we'll do is the two-step, but, it'll be a sensual one, you can bet...smiling here... Thanks. Winter Wren, As said earlier, I enjoyed creating this, and am happy you think it is amazing, soft, warm and beautiful. Thanks so much for taking time to read and respond. Marti, Thanks for the 'terrific writing', means a lot you took time to read. Thanks to all of you for responding. Hugs and warmest regards, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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