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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
Set thunder to the distance Where fire meets heaping black rock Let the mirrors of life Reflect your secrets Make for us an answer Tall brown ones bend and sway Naked but never alone They reach a hello to the painter The One who brushed the sky With kisses Sleep, my love In due season your soul Shall revive Sunkissed |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
haunting... and very well done.. Set thunder to the distance Where fire meets heaping black rock Let the mirrors of life Reflect your secrets Make for us an answer liked this especially... |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
Thank you, Cpat. Quite a compliment coming from a poet of "awesome dimensions".  Sunkissed. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) This is so lovely, sweet friend, may loves warmth always fill those hearts who dream or have lost it, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Ice_Queen Junior Member
since 2002-12-04
Posts 29Delaware, USA |
Eloquent. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Awesome - in it's image, wording and style Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
Thank you everyone. Sunkissed |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sunkissed, this is very well-written. I enjoyed reading it. "Love makes the world go around" ~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (12-07-2002 06:24 PM).] |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
Excellent--like your style!! "And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul." |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Not sure whether the "Sunkissed" is intended to be the last line or not (noticed that you write that after all your poems), but I like it there - it tied up the poem and put a little interesting spin on it. Some cool images here tied in with the emotional intentions. Very nice. C |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful! |
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