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Sunkissed
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0 posted 2002-12-06 08:32 PM



Set thunder to the distance
Where fire meets heaping black rock
Let the mirrors of life
Reflect your secrets
Make for us an answer

Tall brown ones bend and sway
Naked but never alone
They reach a hello to the painter
The One who brushed the sky
With kisses

Sleep, my love
In due season your soul
Shall revive
Sunkissed

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Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2002-12-06 08:34 PM


haunting... and very well done..

Set thunder to the distance
Where fire meets heaping black rock
Let the mirrors of life
Reflect your secrets
Make for us an answer

liked this especially...



Sunkissed
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2 posted 2002-12-07 09:30 AM


Thank you, Cpat. Quite a compliment coming from a poet of "awesome dimensions".

Sunkissed.

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3 posted 2002-12-07 03:07 PM




(sigh) This is so lovely, sweet friend, may loves warmth always fill those hearts who dream or have lost it, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Ice_Queen
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4 posted 2002-12-07 04:20 PM


Eloquent.
Kethry
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5 posted 2002-12-07 06:08 PM


Awesome - in it's image, wording  and style
Kethry

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Sunkissed
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6 posted 2002-12-07 06:17 PM


Thank you everyone.

Sunkissed

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7 posted 2002-12-07 06:23 PM


Sunkissed, this is very well-written. I
enjoyed reading it.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (12-07-2002 06:24 PM).]

Sandpiper
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8 posted 2002-12-08 07:10 AM


Excellent--like your style!!

"And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul."
Pablo Neruda

Christopher
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9 posted 2002-12-08 08:03 PM


Not sure whether the "Sunkissed" is intended to be the last line or not (noticed that you write that after all your poems), but I like it there - it tied up the poem and put a little interesting spin on it.

Some cool images here tied in with the emotional intentions. Very nice.

C

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10 posted 2002-12-10 03:01 AM


beautiful!
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