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cutup
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since 2002-12-06

Posts 1

0 posted 2002-12-06 07:29 PM

pallor white burns
my colder walls. then
room to think, in my
never can be and
never eyes move that
drawn blinds sunken
face unwinds pale
about nothing
alone here left
stark and gray white
stares my room blank
the imprints, ideas
that were never
things and that never were.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2002-12-06 07:34 PM

welcome to passions!

I'm sure you'll like it here, lots of nice people and a variety of poetry

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

2 posted 2002-12-06 08:20 PM

believe in what your heart feels...

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-12-06 08:23 PM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
Much enjoyed your first post!
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Life is too short not to believe in Santa Claus ~

Poet deVine

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since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

4 posted 2002-12-06 10:30 PM

Welcome! We hope you enjoy your time here - please check your email for a special welcome.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2002-12-07 09:36 AM

Welcome. Burnt pallor walls.... interesting imagery.

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (12-07-2002 09:37 AM).]

doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

6 posted 2002-12-07 10:05 AM

i love cut ups
nice job
welcome to the blue

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

7 posted 2002-12-07 12:18 PM

I really loved this first post. I think you will like it here at Passions, welcome to Ron's home. Enjoy your time within these walls.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

8 posted 2002-12-07 12:26 PM

cutup
Welcome and enjoyed the read.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2002-12-07 12:41 PM

(smiles) Oh my gosh, this is such a gorgeous debut filled with such heart and soul, sweet friend, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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