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regards2you
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since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

0 posted 2002-12-06 01:45 PM

May I

Be humble,
not high.

Learn,
before teach.

Think,
before act.

Listen
with mind
to hear

~your importance~
.

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2002-12-06 02:06 PM

regards2you
Good one, enjoyed the read.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2002-12-06 02:40 PM

very nice...

something we should all embrace in our lives someway.

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

3 posted 2002-12-07 10:17 PM

Seymour and Ron,

I so appreciate you both reading and responding.

There are thoughts in this little poem which I really like, though quite common, maybe I can re-use in a different poem, for others didn't seem take to it as a whole. (Maybe the thoughts! Duh, I can be so dense, sometimes...smiling here, thanks...

Warmest regards, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

4 posted 2002-12-07 11:09 PM

Wisdoms worth integrating.

-MVS

"AS ABOVE SO BELOW"

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2002-12-07 11:13 PM

Smiling at this, twenty is rarely less.

Well done.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

6 posted 2002-12-08 03:46 AM

Pat, I wasn't here earlier, and almost missed this
treasure of words.....and I loved the thoughts you
wrote, too. Back to the top, where it should be.....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

7 posted 2002-12-08 04:07 AM

..and may you
keep writing!!!

I love it, such great words and ideas so confined and precise.
Keep it up; really wonderful.

Always, GG

- And so it was that time stood still -

Sandpiper
Senior Member

since 2002-06-15

Posts 738
land of flora and fauna

8 posted 2002-12-08 07:09 AM

Words to live by--enjoyed!

"And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul."
Pablo Neruda

The Lonely Stranger
Member

since 1999-06-18

Posts 361
Upstate, NY, USA

9 posted 2002-12-08 07:46 AM

I like the message very much !

... and they sent him home happy ... one hundred percent.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

10 posted 2002-12-08 11:00 AM

Pat, this is another "must save" of yours! I love poems that are full of wisdom and caring.

~ warm hugs for a wise and warm heart

Linda

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

11 posted 2002-12-08 11:01 AM

very nice

M

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

12 posted 2004-05-28 04:07 AM

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