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Water Dance On Warm Words
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Water Dance On Warm Words |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
a night read of you, while through my windowpane the light ballet moves over lake's thin skin; I watch as glitter ripples tiptoe shore to the rhythm of winter's mint-lick exhale flesh draws tight against the cold, I bed the night quilting your voice around and through a water dance on warm words 'tis only the scent of you I've yet to know; so I close my eyes imagining and waiting to inhale~~ [This message has been edited by Sandpiper (12-06-2002 08:07 AM).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
indeed sounds as if soul would be lucky to have one think of them like this... I enjoyed the read and the thoughts, this cold morning. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
the unknown lover, like the next one to come, always the best nice poem, inspireing |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is a beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing.  "Love makes the world go around" |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Lovely, lovely imaging and imagining! Some deliciously vivid lines. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Very nice indeed, imaginging that one yet to be found , breathed upon the wind. Enjoyed |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sandpiper No need to shovel snow that melted it. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Sandpiper, This is so beautiful. I love it! Especially liked this line: ...."of winter's mint-lick exhale"... This is so well written it is nice to go back and re-read...it doesn't lose anything, but, rather I find more.... and more....I adore...am printing if ok with you. Warm regards, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
We forage and make do adding fuel to the fire. Desire, desire inspires. [This message has been edited by RSWells (12-06-2002 02:08 PM).] |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Wonderful images and emotions created in this write.... believe in what your heart feels... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Your title drew me here. What a wonderful present I found. Excellent. ThisDiamond |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Your gorgeous words are always glissading over oceans, sweet friend, this is a lovely pas seul of passion! (big hugggssssss) I love it, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sandpiper, I'm saving this one! Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I love this!! And,....I'm keeping it. ~Hugs~ ~ Life is too short not to believe in Santa Claus ~ |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
Soft and oh so romantic. My kind of poetry. Sunkissed. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I watch as glitter ripples tiptoe shore to the rhythm of winter's mint-lick exhale flesh draws tight against the cold, I bed the night quilting your voice around and through a water dance on warm words Damn, I like this! |
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