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Poeting ...One Too Many
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Poeting ...One Too Many |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Poeting I am in a poet mood striking out with words instead of dreaming dreams and wandering thoughts, and place them here so they are read. I am in a solemn mood a loving moment, of serious mind in want to capture the who of you, the one I know in hidden find. I am in a tender mood sensitive, softhearted yet mindful of the rules of love, the romantic me does not forget. You set them up for me to break each morning come, when I awake. A tennis game, sometimes it feels, the score to tie, I'm on your heels. I write in rhyme, no pattern though each verse alone I seem to throw upon this pad, a noted view to feel this feel, in loving you. No pattern comes when words appear just love-you thoughts, for you to hear if only in your mind of me I want for this, to always be. I am in a loving mood and have you here in front of me. This rhyme of nonsense on this night I pocket close, for you to be. I am in a poet mood striking out with words instead of dreaming dreams and wandering thoughts, and place them here so they are read. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Maureen, your poet mood suits you very well and has given us a nicely conceived write. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thanks Barry, I just am fooling around tonight..can't play anymore in the snow.  M |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Solemn, tender, loving and poetic...what better mood can one ask for?  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
awwww you say the sweetest things... I won't believe Toerag anymore  M |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big huggssssssss) Oh Maureen, this is sooooooo beautifully heartfelt, sweet friend, yay, I LOVE IT!!! (kiss on cheek) You are a true poet and you write with the blood of your dreams, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Rainbowdust Member
since 2002-12-05
Posts 320Sydney, Australia |
I'm a new member and am so thrilled with this place and all the wonderful poetry! I really enjoyed yours; I love poetry which is a snapshot of a particular moment or time, or mood. It's nice to be able to snatch something away from time's unsympathetic hand and you're talented to be able to do it so beautifully! The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Maureen, I love your poetic mood you're in an the poem it inspired you to write. Oh, and you sure can write a good poem to just be playing around. HaHa!! "Love makes the world go around" |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
a fine poetic mood after playing in the snow then |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Noah, thank you for your kind words. Rainbowdust, yes so much wonderful poetry to read. I hope you enjoy your time spent here *s That was beautiful response M Ethel, I was in a writing mood and could not stop myself yesterday. Probably should have Martin, yes all I did yesterday was play and I will pay for it all later, *s Thank you M |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
hmmmm.."a poet mood"..can't think of a better place to be--enjoyed! "And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul." |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Your poet moods always seem so soft Enjoy reading them. Gloom |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Wow! I love this one M. You are very talented, and moody like me |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
not so sure about talent..*s but definitely moody hugsssss M |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
I LOVE THIS! And that mood strikes us all from time to time. Hugs, Marti 'A witty saying proves nothing.' |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hi Maureen, This is fantastic. I love your poet mood. Sandra |
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