Ode to Unresolved Sexual Tension

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Ice_Queen
Junior Member

since 2002-12-04

Posts 29
Delaware, USA

0 posted 2002-12-05 04:02 PM

Silk of lips
Sharpness of tongue
Taste of your kiss

I want.

Pressure of hands
Dexterity of fingers
Feel of your touch

I need.

Blanket of ecstacy
Enclosure of home
Hold of your arms

I crave.

Spheres of seduction
Circles of hypnosis
Sight of your eyes

I revere.

Threads of heaven
Scent of you
Strands of your hair

I desire.

Texture of skin
Tang of sweat
Dip of your neck

I yearn.

Feel of flesh
Aroma of heat
Pull of your body

I idolize.

Smoothness of words
Rhythyms of whispers
Sound of your voice

I endear.

Strength of limbs
Fire of purification
Power of your moves

I worship.

Brush of force
Push of paradise
Potency of your instincts

I love.

Give yourself to me.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

1 posted 2002-12-05 04:13 PM

Very passionate and seductive write. Warm thoughts on a frigid day. Though with words like these I don't think your handle suits you.

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

2 posted 2002-12-05 04:18 PM

I think the snow just melted...

RSWells
Member Elite

since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

3 posted 2002-12-05 05:09 PM

Gee, you've got the rythym down that's for sure.

I hear
I hear
I see

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

4 posted 2002-12-05 06:23 PM

I like.

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

5 posted 2002-12-05 06:35 PM

Me too

Let there be peace on earth,
and let it begin with me.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2002-12-05 07:01 PM

Ice_Queen
What ever is left of me, you got it. LOL

doreen peri
Member Elite

since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

7 posted 2002-12-05 07:05 PM

hey, cool write! quite sensual!

watch out~!

they've deleted me
and moved me to adult,
banished me from open
for similar verse.
but that's ok.
things could be worse.

hehe

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2002-12-05 08:29 PM

WOW!!! Oooohhhhhhh...this is a fireball, sweet friend, I love the seductive feel of this, sweet friend, this is sensual, you've made all the icicles drip, I LOVE IT, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

9 posted 2002-12-06 08:30 PM

Ice_Queen - a queen you are, but not of ice...

BC

Magicmystery
Senior Member

since 2002-02-13

Posts 821
Windsor, Ontario, Canada

10 posted 2002-12-06 10:00 PM

If you were truly made of ice ~~queen, you would have surely melted by now.....
                  ~~~~~SIGH~~~~~~

Some one above here said you have the rhythme down... WOW!!!!  this one gave me chills.... and I am placing it into my library pronto. you are inspiring me.... stay tuned for an update in this .... and the beat goes on.... ( I wouldn't be entirely suprised, Doreen, but I hope this one stays in open)  Simply Gorgeous and HOT images here.

Sherry   ~~~~SSSS~~~

Cherish the good memories of the past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. But above all... be kind to yourself today.
[This message has been edited by Magicmystery (12-06-2002 10:06 PM).]

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

11 posted 2002-12-06 10:04 PM

Oh dang!! This is SO warm it melted all the snow in Canada!
~Hugs~

~ Life is too short not to believe in Santa Claus ~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

12 posted 2002-12-06 11:25 PM

There's something about a womans breast pressing into a mans chest...James

Elimeno P
Junior Member

since 2002-12-06

Posts 17
The only place I want to be!

13 posted 2002-12-06 11:35 PM

Sharp tongues? I used to get in trouble for having one of those....OH! Wait! That was a "smart" tongue!

This was very good, but I was really taken by the title (sizzle sizzle).

EP

[This message has been edited by Elimeno P (12-06-2002 11:36 PM).]

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

14 posted 2002-12-07 09:55 AM

SMiling at this. Too early in the day for sizzling, especially when I'm sitting here by myself, just a teasing keyboard and monitor in front of me.

Well done, but aren't the polar icecaps already melting fast enough?

Ice_Queen
Junior Member

since 2002-12-04

Posts 29
Delaware, USA

15 posted 2002-12-07 03:51 PM

By the way, guys...um are there very strict guidelines about potentially explicit material. Being new, I'm not real sure...this one doesn't too graphic or anything (in my opinion,) but it could be perceived by others to be...alil too hot for pc.

Thank you for all your comments. I feel so loved.

Glad you liked.

And yes, I love this kinda of rhythym, it sorta went with the content...

Hope you all enjoyed.

Any critiques?

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

16 posted 2002-12-08 04:34 AM

Yeah there are a few guidelines on the info page somewhere but this one doesn't break any of them. I'm new too and i've learned the hard way, I've been censored twice already.

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