Open Poetry #23 |
Iambic moronic(and thanks to M) |
kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Iambic is a fretful pattern true; But ne’er say ne’er is what we need to do. For if we write with all our heart and soul, We trust that we shall seek and find our goal So thank you for your lifting words to us Who toil and strain with words that make us cuss. The reasons why we strain to reach our peak Is only that we need the joy we seek |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
darn if I don't hate straining for joy *s glad you posted this..mine was to be blank verse so I couldn't rhyme like I wanted to. M |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very well done Ken... Myself..I can't rhyme much at all... and do prefer therefore to ramble on in free verse. Much enjoyed. ~Hugs~ ~ Life is too short not to believe in Santa Claus ~ |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
LOL! I question the moronic but not the iambic...it's flawless. |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
To N and B and always present E I thank you for the gift you give to me I want to let my words ring true and free and sometimes pattern po'try is the key Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Ken, this is excellent, sweet friend, I couldn't agree with you more and always love to write in free verse as rhyming is a beauty but to express yourself honestly is more important! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ken, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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