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Open Poetry #23

camoflauge

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2002-12-05 01:31 PM

this camoflauge
of white,
a mere diversion
to true colors
that lay beneath,
in crimsons, golds
and browns,
we played,
rolling naked
in autumns leaves,
across the october
threshold
as you
broke through
the dreamworld
and carried me

Thomas119gold
Senior Member

since 2002-06-03

Posts 708
Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)

1 posted 2002-12-05 02:01 PM

Hmmm sounds like the dreamworld was nice
But the awaking was better
Nice Job
Thomas

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2002-12-05 02:07 PM

I liked the picture you painted with your words. I liked the images
I saw in my mind's eye of me and my "Love", too.....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

3 posted 2002-12-05 02:08 PM

inkedgoddess~
You've penned some lovely imagery in this piece.
I enjoyed the read.
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

RSWells
Member Elite

since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

4 posted 2002-12-05 04:36 PM

And beneath the crimsons and browns are the greens, verdant and lush. Write on.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

5 posted 2002-12-05 05:10 PM

thanks for the colorful comments........truly.

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