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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Foibles Foibles on a dance floor Shook her to the very core. A maiden fair was roughly spun Around and round in the wild of fun There in the music’s sway Twirling in the oddest way He thought he followed rhythms beat That only to her were tangled feet Wonderment set his face With each miss step that he did grace He really did not seem to know That his pivoting was on her toe He stopped in shear delight Looked upon a face of white And thought he was the prince of flair And he asked once more if she would care? She gave his nose a playful pull And said no thanks my card is full. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
And I get so tired of people pivoting on me too.....I can dance though?....Nice "soft shoe" here psai.... |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
I danced with him..once!..enjoyed the early morning smile! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) This is delightful, sweet friend, I too always get that smile when I see someone dance like that as I wish for grace to always find a way to everyones heart! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is lovely, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Toe Don't give them your dance card. LOL Have a good one. Sandpiper Most girls do at least once and some times twice. LOL Have a nice day. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, You mean you got your nose pulled too? LOL |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
I think we have all danced with someone like this.  I enjoyed this much |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
whiskey I think you're right, thanks for t he read. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oh yeah, I've danced with someone like that, too.....more than once. I know though, Mr. Seymour, that this one wasn't about you..... You have too much grace to step on someone's toes... but, just in case you did, you would get more chances, I'm sure. "Love makes the world go around" ~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (12-05-2002 10:38 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
garysgirl Enjoyed your sweet reply, thank you. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy Me thinks this must have been the polka. Fun, but dangerous.  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SeymourAstaire~  'I won't dance ... don't ask me ...I won't dance ... don't ask me ...' Just one twirl around the floor Podiatrist waiting at the door~ Thankee my friend ... I love smiling with you~ Now, don't go getting your nose outta joint !  *Huglets* ~*Ginger*~  ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie LOL that would be a good guess.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Well since you won't dance, I won't ask. LOL |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Mr. T. I would always make room for you on my dance card! And since I used to be a dancer, if you wanted some free lessons, I would love to whirl and twirl with you---across a dance floor that is! (I never know if Isabelle is reading or watching! tehe) P.S. Even if you gave me a black eye, and broke my shoes by stepping on them (all which occurred on my very first date with a very enthusiastic, yet clumsy, young lad!)--it would still be a pleasure to be in your company--and your wife's of course! tehe EA |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
As one who's trod on toes that she also used to step on me, I laughed until I could not see At such a dance in disharmony. Nice job!! KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel You are the sweetest and I'd love to dance with you. kayjay Nice reply and I thank you. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
love those closing couplets...charming are you  Im left handed and led footed... cant dance to save me mothy life..I'd be the one doing the two step on your toes *L* got any steel toes boots? lets boogie then baby LOL [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (12-05-2002 02:35 PM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
*lol* M |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I loved this! I love to dance, and dance even doing housework. However, to a dancer there is nothing worse than sending even one song with those guys with their foibles, cause they get me "fumb" down, You are the cutest patootie in Florida you know that right? |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sharon, Patootie is not a word of your generation, where did you find it? But thank you anyway. Maureen, LOL back to you. JM, Never knew a moth that couldn't dance Not if given half a chance. So take hold of Randy and spin around He'll love it and won't make a sound. WWRS  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
 Ahhh Sy!"Dance with me...I want my arms about you..." This is way too cute...but.. "Shall we dance...?"  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Enchantress The dance was wonderful, thank you. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
if i dance with you, will you be my sugar daddy? |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sounds like Psai writes poetry far better than he dances....ME TOO!!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
inkedgoddess If you don't wear steel tipped shoes. LOL |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Barry, I think so too. LOL |
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