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CSKpoet
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Island in Paradise

0 posted 2002-12-05 04:23 AM



Come dance with me among the clouds
Let’s chase the rainbow to its end
Let’s frolic, play, and laugh out loud
Come dance with me among the clouds

Let’s leave our worries on the ground
It’s time for tired souls to mend
Come dance with me among the clouds
And chase your burdens to their end


Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

© Copyright 2002 Cheryl Stewart Koomoa - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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1 posted 2002-12-05 09:47 AM


Cher, you don't have to ask me twice! I'm on my way, girlfriend!

Delightful

~ good morning happy hugs

Linda

regards2you
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2 posted 2002-12-05 09:57 AM




Cher, Save a place for me. I'm coming too!  This is so uplifting. I love it!


Warm regards, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

garysgirl
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3 posted 2002-12-05 02:04 PM


Hey, wait for me, I wanta go, too!!!!

  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

Enchantress
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4 posted 2002-12-05 02:42 PM


Love this Cher!
Wonderful rhythm!
~Hugs~

~ Life is too short not to believe in Santa Claus ~

nakdthoughts
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5 posted 2002-12-05 02:48 PM


I love triolets...this one was a soft read. *s
M

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6 posted 2002-12-05 02:50 PM


triolets.... some sort of hybrid violet that has three leaves? ( evil grin)

Very soft..very nicely done...

I enjoyed

Mistletoe Angel
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7 posted 2002-12-05 11:31 PM




(smiles) Oh Cheryl, this is lovely, sweet friend, I love all kinds of poetic forms and you are a delight to us all, sweet friend, this is a true gem, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Cheryl, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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