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Open Poetry #23

Not All That Good

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2002-12-05 03:54 AM

Not All
That Good

  The magic wears off
and suddenly she doesn't call you
  as much anymore.
  The magic wears off
and you become yesterdays interest.
  Nothing less or nothing more.

How does it feel
  to be yesterdays
   object of affection
    and todays
     recipient
    of rejection?

    Not
   all
  that
good.

JamesLee
December05
  2002

CSKpoet
Senior Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 845
Island in Paradise

1 posted 2002-12-05 04:02 AM

very sad but also the real woman is yet to come dear James...I know the waiting is hard....
hugs, cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

2 posted 2002-12-05 11:10 AM

well thats how it goes, you want what you cant have,
when its in front of you, you tire of it.......such is the game and truth of love........for sure, lived it.done it.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2002-12-05 12:06 PM

never feels all that good...

enjoyed the read..and the thoughts...

Walter Poe
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 787

4 posted 2002-12-05 12:43 PM

definite understatement for "not all that good" read "like heart ripped out of chest"

Take a good look at my face
Well, don't my smile look out of place
look a little closer its easy to trace
The tracks of my tears

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2002-12-05 12:48 PM

Oh, James, my heart goes out to you for the sadness you're feeling.

I hope and pray that you'll soon find the love that you so
much deserve. Don't ever undersell yourself, sweet friend. Some
woman will be very proud to meet you one day........

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

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