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why do you hate me?
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why do you hate me? |
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rm711 Member
since 2002-11-30
Posts 131Wiltshire, England 
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I’m trying so hard And you keep pushing me back I’m walking against the wind And it’s blowing a gale Who is gonna pick me up? When there’s no one here that cares I will just lie in this puddle And grow cold As the cold comes closer I shiver My head is falling apart Trying to hold on to all I have left I’m gripping it so tight Like it’s my favourite thing But it’s still slipping through my fingers And floating away What made you all hate me this way? Why do you look at me with such malice? Is it me? Or is my life all a waste of time? Rosie Mitchell |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Take two aspirin...it may help... seriously, I don't know how to respond to this but if true maybe you are taking things out of context. M |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Rosie, this sounds sincere and it is heartfelt, here. Not sure if you are speaking of yourself or not, but my heart goes out to you. Many hugs and warm regards, Pat keep writing for it helps you and others who might be feeling like this but unable to express it as well as you. also, sometimes it feels like we are hated when indeed others are caught up in their own problems, not realizing how you might be feeling. If this is you, have you tried talking w. them? Hugs and smiles, I'll look for more of your writing. ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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rm711 Member
since 2002-11-30
Posts 131Wiltshire, England |
I decided the best thing to do after writing this would be 2 go 2 bed! It worked I'm fine now. I think I probably over-exaggerated a little but thats exactly how I felt at the time, oh well! Thanks for your kind replys. Rosie Mitchell |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
life is never a waste of time...things are difficult sometimes, and we all want to be accepted and held and needed and appreciated. I know the feeling of trying so hard and getting nothing... |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
expressive and i hope a work of imagination arthur |
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