Open Poetry #23 |
Winter's Bird |
scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Winter's Bird Red flash in the tree. Cardinal lights on bare branch. Seed nestled in beak. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Yay! Oh Scorpio, I just love cardinals so much just as I love bluebirds and all other birds, sweet friend, I am blessed to have stellar jays and flickers and magpies all around at this time of year, this is wonderful, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Scorpio, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I see it all and I like what I see! A little piece of perfection! EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
scorpio, Enjoyed the read. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very expertly done Scorpio! You have managed to capture some fine imagery with this one. So much enjoyed.. and the cardinal does look beautiful in contrast to the white snow... ~Hugs....and for this keeper~ ~ Life is too short not to believe in Santa Claus ~ [This message has been edited by Enchantress (12-04-2002 02:18 PM).] |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Thank you, Noah...You are very blessed to have such a variety of birds visiting you this winter.. Earth Angel...your kind words are very much appreciated.. Sy...I'm glad you enjoyed this haiku...it means a lot to have your support.. Thank you, Enchantress...I'm honoured that you feel this is worthy of your library...the bright red of the cardinal certainly stands out against the white of the snow...another of nature's brilliant accents... |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
Enjoyed--love the image of "red flash in the tree"! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done... I enjoyed |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Thank you, Sandpiper..glad you stopped in. Cpat Hair...your comments are much appreciated. believe in what your heart feels... |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
You painted a great image; enjoyed. Warm regards, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
beautiful haiku scorpio!! youve penned one of my favorite winter images. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Scorpio, I love birds and you have certainly painted a beautiful picture here for us to read. Thank you. "Love makes the world go around" |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Pat...thank you...the picture really created itself...but I take credit for it...*S* Thank you Janet Marie...your picture was a wonderful compliment to the haiku...it's very difficult to find a more beautiful creature than a cardinal in the winter... Ethel...I'm glad you enjoyed this poem..I'm told cardinals in the south are very tame...eating seeds out of a person's hand...the ones here are very wary of people... believe in what your heart feels... |
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